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Alyssaaaaaaaaaaaa. That was incredible. Why you gotta make me so sad? You wrote those emotions so real. And the cover art too? Spectacular. Wow. Just wow.

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My heart ☹️ that was beautiful, the cover art too. Thanks for sharing

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Oh

My

Gosh

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What did I just read? This was incredible! Alyssa! How did you just portray such emotion?

I feel sad for Woods all over again! My fury at Nelson is rekindled and I am reminded of Matt’s goodness.

You are an incredible writer. Thank you for this story

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Amazing story Alyssa man I got sad want Matt hugs woods really amazing story Alyssa and also amazing cover art 👍

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This is some fantastic work and oh boy the tears are flowing! After all this time, woods has his moment in the spotlight, to me, he always seemed like someone who was just "there" ya know, still did his part and helped and was a big part of the team, but always felt like he was ignored or pushed to the side. Reading this has given a good perspective on how another member of the team feels, especially with all the guilt that's piled up throughout things' and especially during this exact moment in the story. It would be great if we got more short stories from the other members to see how they feel about certain scenarios in the story, also I've said this in many of the videos and i will say it here, when Nelson says "When he comes he will see that I am the absolute!" who is he talking about? We have not gotten an answer from this yet, or at least i have not found one, some people are saying it is farther but i think it's someone that Nelson himself is working for, a much higher authority. Maybe one day we will find out exactly who "HE" is.

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I feel the sammeee way, that’s really why I wanted to write about Woods. How he feels isn’t addressed really, and I really wanted some type of closure for him

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Well you did a brilliant job of it, you really captured how woods would no doubt think and feel in those moments.

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That was amazing, the description of emotion was beautiful. It felt so real.

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My heart 😭

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This is so beautiful and sweet!!

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Amazing story, just the raw emotion. I did cry. I read out loud, so that made it hit harder. Wonderful work, I hope you do more!

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Very good short story. It made me cry a bit which I was not expecting

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Damn emotions but good

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This is so well written and I love this story so much!!! I almost cried, great job!

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