Omg, that's brilliant, the way things went and the roads it went down were fantastic! That ending too was pretty good, it left me with a sense of wanting to know more but also having it be a perfect way to end, Abby you outdid yourself.
If 04, why is Officer Colt waiting so long before diving deeper into the investigation of Wes's murder, which I believe happened in 03, according to the S2 videos "I Had To Go To The Hospital" and "I Witnessed a Murder! **Caught on Camera!**'"?
If it does take place in 03, why would he want records of Wes's movements from 2002?
Also, how old are the photocopies of Jordan Kendall's monthly planner at the time Jim gets to this point in his investigation?
Hi there! Here to answer some of your questions! The story takes place in December of 2003 and leaks into January 2004, so the investigation is 5 months in.
He would like records that track Wes’s movements because he believes that the murderer may be someone close to him. Most likely at work or in his family. At the moment, he is looking into work.
The photocopies of Scott’s planner from Jordan are only 4 months old. Because of when the story takes place, this is be especially risky for Jordan to do since Scott is still USING the planner. But I guess that Jordan for you!
Abby, it’s sooooo good! Wow! I’m in love with the new characters! My heart jumped into my throat when Syphus came into the archives room. Ahhhhh.
I’m so glad everyone enjoyed it! Thank you so much for your comments! Poor poor Myra...😏
Can you write more? Continue this story thread perhaps? Amazing work!
AAABBBYYYY this is so good. I got so nervous when Nelson came in the room. Oh my goshhhh
Poor Myra...I have a feeling on what happened to her and I don’t like it 😣
SOO GOOD!!! Gave me chills!
Omg, that's brilliant, the way things went and the roads it went down were fantastic! That ending too was pretty good, it left me with a sense of wanting to know more but also having it be a perfect way to end, Abby you outdid yourself.
Ahhh! That was a great story Abby! Awesome job!
Interesting plotline on Jim Colt!
A few questions for my personal curiosity!:
Does this story take place in 2003 or 04?
If 04, why is Officer Colt waiting so long before diving deeper into the investigation of Wes's murder, which I believe happened in 03, according to the S2 videos "I Had To Go To The Hospital" and "I Witnessed a Murder! **Caught on Camera!**'"?
If it does take place in 03, why would he want records of Wes's movements from 2002?
Also, how old are the photocopies of Jordan Kendall's monthly planner at the time Jim gets to this point in his investigation?
Hi there! Here to answer some of your questions! The story takes place in December of 2003 and leaks into January 2004, so the investigation is 5 months in.
He would like records that track Wes’s movements because he believes that the murderer may be someone close to him. Most likely at work or in his family. At the moment, he is looking into work.
The photocopies of Scott’s planner from Jordan are only 4 months old. Because of when the story takes place, this is be especially risky for Jordan to do since Scott is still USING the planner. But I guess that Jordan for you!
Okay, gotcha!
Hope to see an implementation of Ms. Porter's part of the story in the next season!
This is the first of 4 contest winning fan written short stories to be posted over the coming weeks! I agree, it is fantastic!