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Abby, it’s sooooo good! Wow! I’m in love with the new characters! My heart jumped into my throat when Syphus came into the archives room. Ahhhhh.

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I’m so glad everyone enjoyed it! Thank you so much for your comments! Poor poor Myra...😏

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AAABBBYYYY this is so good. I got so nervous when Nelson came in the room. Oh my goshhhh

Poor Myra...I have a feeling on what happened to her and I don’t like it 😣

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SOO GOOD!!! Gave me chills!

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Omg, that's brilliant, the way things went and the roads it went down were fantastic! That ending too was pretty good, it left me with a sense of wanting to know more but also having it be a perfect way to end, Abby you outdid yourself.

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Ahhh! That was a great story Abby! Awesome job!

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Interesting plotline on Jim Colt!

A few questions for my personal curiosity!:

Does this story take place in 2003 or 04?

If 04, why is Officer Colt waiting so long before diving deeper into the investigation of Wes's murder, which I believe happened in 03, according to the S2 videos "I Had To Go To The Hospital" and "I Witnessed a Murder! **Caught on Camera!**'"?

If it does take place in 03, why would he want records of Wes's movements from 2002?

Also, how old are the photocopies of Jordan Kendall's monthly planner at the time Jim gets to this point in his investigation?

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