Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh. The way she referred to him like we refer to God in the Bible... ‘He, Him’... that’s beautiful. He really is her god. Good job!
Holy cow. My heart is hurting for this girl who is so caught up in Nelson’s web. I was shouting at the screen for Nelson to shut up and for Autumn to see through his “dearest Autumn” tactics. So wonderfully written and so wonderfully thought out. Hats off to you Nyx! 🫡
I love these short stories so excited for season 5. I wonder what the next short story will be about. I am also so excited for what will happened in season 5
This was beautiful. Like a character piece. I personally found Autumn a slightly shallow character, but this, I wanted her to succeed, I felt so sad when Syphus was disappointed. I loved the little details, how she mimicked his speech, how she changed her "juvenile" apartment, and how He, Him, and His were capitalized. My favorite thing about this is for me, this gave the ending of Season 4 so much more impact and heightened the season as a whole. Maybe this is bad, but I'm happy she fulfilled her promise. This is a masterpiece.
wow this story is powerful you could feel Autumn's emotions and how she wanted to please Nelson, but you can also see Autumn is torn between doing what is right and what is wrong. You can also see Nelson as a someone who does not want to get his hands dirty and how he expects others to listen to him and do what he wants done even it means killing someone. Looking forward to the next story. Great job on these stories.
Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh. The way she referred to him like we refer to God in the Bible... ‘He, Him’... that’s beautiful. He really is her god. Good job!
Holy cow. My heart is hurting for this girl who is so caught up in Nelson’s web. I was shouting at the screen for Nelson to shut up and for Autumn to see through his “dearest Autumn” tactics. So wonderfully written and so wonderfully thought out. Hats off to you Nyx! 🫡
I love these short stories so excited for season 5. I wonder what the next short story will be about. I am also so excited for what will happened in season 5
Delightfully creepy!
I want to reach through and give her a hug, so much.
I’m a little late but this was awesome!! Beautifully written, I actually wanted Autumn to succeed. This was so good
This story was so good and so have all the others I'm sad that there is only one more left to read :c
Loved it!! Absolutely loved it!! Hope to read more 863 short stories from you!
damn that's amazing :D I think Autumn was captured perfectly in her "love" towards Sythus :D
This was beautiful. Like a character piece. I personally found Autumn a slightly shallow character, but this, I wanted her to succeed, I felt so sad when Syphus was disappointed. I loved the little details, how she mimicked his speech, how she changed her "juvenile" apartment, and how He, Him, and His were capitalized. My favorite thing about this is for me, this gave the ending of Season 4 so much more impact and heightened the season as a whole. Maybe this is bad, but I'm happy she fulfilled her promise. This is a masterpiece.
Very intriguing! I like this kind of look into a character, lol I’m a sucker for character development like this 😅
Great job, Nyx! This was splendid!
First here but this was my favorite story so far
Great job!!
Wonderfully written. You really see how much she was under Nelson's spell.
wow this story is powerful you could feel Autumn's emotions and how she wanted to please Nelson, but you can also see Autumn is torn between doing what is right and what is wrong. You can also see Nelson as a someone who does not want to get his hands dirty and how he expects others to listen to him and do what he wants done even it means killing someone. Looking forward to the next story. Great job on these stories.