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omg this was a great start & im so excited to read more!!

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Well done, Maddie! This is splendid. Not gonna lie, got a little emotional reading Chloe’s message. <3

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you maddie this is amazing!! you did an amazing job! cannot wait to read the other winners!

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Is this a side part to the main storyline? Mathias mentioned something about a side story and the main story you would have to pay for, so is this a side story?

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This is so cool I can't wait for all the new stories!

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awww this was awesome!! :D great short story! hope to see more :D

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Wow just wow

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It sounds amazing so far please keep writing!

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Omg so good!!!!!! I love it!!

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Gosh, I'm so excited to see more from Subject 4! With this being as great as it is, I can't wait for more canon short stories!

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This was so good!

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I hope they release this as a book.

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This is so good! Exited for the next oneee!!!

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This is awesome! Can't wait to continue the story through these!

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This is amazing! I like that you put in a couple of big words bc I'm not a very good reader and I don't know what a lot of words mean so this helps me learn how to pronounce words and to know the meanings of words that I didn't even know existed! Thanks for all your hard work! Love you

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An incredible first short story, way to go Maddie, ignore the naysayer, i think it’s amazing

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