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Monroe's story continues.... This was such an amazing read! Great job Maddie! It was so cool to see how Monroe turned out and ending up getting out of Syntec! When she punched Jasper in the face I felt such a wave of satisfaction! And what an interesting twist with Arden! It really shows how Sytnec must have twisted him to be the way that we knew him in the main story. At least he was able to help Monroe. And the ending! With her final words it would be so cool to see her take a stand and help the 863 team! Or maybe she already has.... She did specify the word "burn" so it would be so cool if she was the true reason of the Syntec fire! Though I'm not sure if we already solved that, the rabbit hole has gone on for so long 😂. But once again, this was amazing, great work Maddie!

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I moment I read “I’m beginning to understand why Chole made that recording,” my brain stopped working.

This was an incredible experience to read! I’ve been hoping to see more of Monroe since the moment we met her in “An Irrevocable Life-Altering Decision!” Maddie, incredible job! You’re such a wonderful writer! I hope she gets plenty more punches in! Somehow.

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EPIC!!!

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Wow! This really makes me curious about Arden’s story through all of this. What did he do to be considered the most aggressive scientist? Why did he help Monroe escape? How did he end up the way he was when the team met him? 🤔 Also hope we get to see Monroe again! :D

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Wow, really just wow that was good Maddie, you painted a very nice picture and that punch felt so needed and i hope it's not the last time she will take a swing. This was a brilliant story and a very nice ending too, can't wait to see more from you, keep up the great work.

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So sick Maddie!! Love how her story is continuing, I’m so glad to hear she got out

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