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Abby Schuff (DiViSuCa18)'s avatar

Oh my gosh. I could feel Jordan’s fear and Ben’s fury. I could see Wes’s face and hear Deb’s. This was amazing. Well done 🫡

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B. L. Wilson's avatar

Thank you very much!

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Abby Schuff (DiViSuCa18)'s avatar

I got artwork inspiration almost immediately. Gonna work on it tonight. Hope you like it! 😁

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B. L. Wilson's avatar

Glad to hear and I look forward to seeing it 😊

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LuellaL0L's avatar

A fitting end to the first round of short stories! Good job all of the authors!

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AK Subject 420's avatar

I want to say just wow the story canons are amazing can’t wait for season 5 story now 🤩

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Jose Tapia's avatar

Seeing this made my day! Love it! I admire the emotions within the words the characters are expressing during their moments at Syntec. Outstanding storytelling skills ^_^

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B. L. Wilson's avatar

Thank you!

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Jose Tapia's avatar

You're Welcome! ^_^

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Elizabeth Schneider's avatar

I loved all of the short stories so far and can not wait to find out where season 5 will take us.

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Hunter Ropes's avatar

Just so detailed

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Anthony Stefan's avatar

Wow I’m nervous while hearing Jordan nervous

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Lucarn Anderson's avatar

this is so well done! fabulous job!

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Isabelle's avatar

Amazing it was so in depth and inspirational

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Wolfs Prop Creations's avatar

I have been listening to the soundtrack while reading all these and let me tell you they impact hard, the music gives so much more life and energy to them, maybe these short stories or something should be made into a graphic novel? I can't wait for another round of short stories and for the first chapter, great work to everyone involved.

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Gina's avatar

This was great!

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Joshua Stott's avatar

another amazing story. i can't wait for the rest of them.

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Cj's avatar

Omg. SOOO GOOD!!!

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Kris's avatar

Wow the emotions were just flying off the screen. This story was wow. I really enjoyed reading this story. Keep up the great writing Subject 4.

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Kelly Green's avatar

Nicely written. I enjoyed reading that.

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Jayden Callaghan's avatar

Another amazing story by our talented community. I also love the fact that it’s now canon that Ben thinks mayo goes on meatball sandwiches! Love that. Well done! Also nice to hear from Jordan after a while.

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