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Abby Schuff (DiViSuCa18)'s avatar

Bethany...why must you cause me such pain!

This was an incredible experience to read! The relationships, the condescension, the tie-ins. This story was perfect in every way!

Nelson, he’s hurting.

He’s hurting so badly and I am struggling to remember what this man does in the very near future. This man. THIS MAN had his best friend killed and authorized the attempted murder of his sister.

His father...

This one line stood out to me.

“The thin smile that eased onto Syphus’ face did anything but make it more palatable.”

This line is referring to Mr. Syphus Senior! But it could be referring to Nelson in another story, and still be perfect. I want more. Desperately!

This was amazing, Bethany! Well done! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Alyssa Abeyta's avatar

Amazing job Bethany!! Sooooo cool, you can really see how Nelson becomes his father in his later years. This was amazing

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